Thursday, 8 November 2012

Writing 5.2



Our kids are our own treasure; they are the ones who are going to lead the human race’s next generation, so our job as adults is to teach them and to raise them to become useful adults in society.

They are people who believe in encouraging their own children to compete with others; it will make them gain knowledge and experience and is better than cooperating with each other.

Some people believe that that should raise their own kids to cooperate with each other to eliminate hatred and to exchange their own knowledge and experience as one team.

In conclusion, there are some people who support raising the kids with competition as it will raise their passion for knowledge, and there are others who support team working and cooperating with others as a way to raise the kids. In my opinion both arguments are necessary to raise and build our kids with; team work and competition are both tools to encourage our kids to be better and to gain experience.

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